River's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[at the creaking gates of dawn]

2 words.... Run-on... And on... And on

I much rather would have herd you do a loop of this and then keep is possibly under a minute
I get that you have a slow song here, I get that you have a dark idea to get across but that is not an excuse for using the same background noise as your baseline and then just extending it for 5 minuets

[Ocean Avenue]

It was mostly the guitar that reminded me of summer

In the future, you might want to change up the baseline more instead of playing the same baseline over and over, there could be a break or two, or a new instrument that picks up the same baseline to make it sound different
Keep it up

ZuneInc responds:

Yeah..i think ill do somethin about that bassline. youre second to say something about it.

[Heaven - InfernoZN]

I would re-upload this under electronic - house, because this actually falls into an electronic epic category, which I have not heard in a while now

To boot, it is very well done too, your choice of the violin complimented the bass nicely
This makes me want to hear your other works

Free2Play responds:

Thanks! That's one thing that's hard for me to get from my head to a song is a good sound and mix of instruments. I was really focusing on making an interesting dynamic composition. A lot of elements of my songs get stale fast.

[Night Ocean]

Nice job on allowing this to be a loop ^.^
There really is nothing wrong with this track, I liked that you used the electronic synth to your advantage and played with the front sound just enough to make it sound different

I would however not classify this as an ambient, id leave this just simply as electronic
Well done

Kr0n0L0gik responds:

Thanks! ^_^

[Fantasy]

This is way, way... Way... Too fast to be dance
This is a little too fast to even be a rave....
Lessen the background fuzz that is playing almost constantly, and bring all other sounds forward in intensity by about 10%

Keep working on it

[april 9]

Would love to hear you un-mud the guitar just a little and bring it a little more forward to really make it pop if you were to re-edit the song
I would also revise the area around 2.50-3.00... It's just a little too garbled, but I think that if you brought the guitar a little more forward that would lessen that a lot

Take it back in and make the 2 small changes, beyond that its an awesome track :3
Everything is fresh, everything keeps a very nice flow to it, it always has a change in the bass line

[Varive Melu (Folge 2)]

Because its so offbeat, and randomized... It makes a beat

It makes me think of the golillas in Tarzan when they get into the camp and start making a tune on everything including the kitchen sink

Liked that you played with where the sounds would play in my speakers
It was very different

Also liked that you put the tag as "glitch" that made me smile ^.^
Keep... Doing... Whatever.. that is :p

[Evan Vega (Drop Contest)]

2.22 is a little bit of a run on

The audio cuts out at 2.34 and its all just dead air to 3.04
Nice choice to have the cymbal run out and then start your track again
A little more work could be done on the audio from 4.24 to 4.41
The audio cuts out again at 4.41

This really is one of your poorer performances that you have submitted,
keep trying

SP34K3RM4N responds:

Did you say that 2:22 was a little run on, That actually happens in house music and The audio cuts out at 2:34 It's meant to be cutted out because i'm having trouble with the drop and that's why i need somebody's help to create it for me A little more could be done at 4:24-4:41 I've done some hard work to it and it seems like it's enough and of course the audio cuts out again at 4:41 because what i said earlier i'm having trouble with the drop and i need somebody to fill it in now if you want to collaborate with me just right click the CD and click "Download song as WAV" then create your drop at 2:34-3:04 and 4:24-4:41 and PM me and i'll hear it Contest ends by 5/15/14 so hurry and have a very nice day tox. :)