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If you listen to 70 funk you can hear that most tunes like this flow like a lava lamp

Gotta move, gotta groove... Gota get sexyyyy

You are close!
Shorten down your run on lengths of tracks, add different sounds, and make it flooowwww

Asian themes are usually very spaced out and rythmic for what they sound like, even when the song is re made into a dance, or techno or electronica song the music itself retains a very spaced out format of note/revibe/revibe/ repeat. pp
Drum and base is note/revibe repeat ff
Rock is note/note/note/revibe revibe revibe ffff

Start with a slow song when you are making a oriental piece, then commonly a increase in play speed is what will kick it up to a video game or electronica song

Oh-Sama responds:

Thanks for your suggestions but to be honest I'm a hobbyist musician my friend :)
I'll try to keep in mind some of what you've said!

Iabsoluty have to agree with frankvg on this

Volume adjustment is a must in music
You might want to just try your hand at getting the song and re-producing it into a song on your own machine...

If the song plays a few chords, go find some syncs in your library that qould fit the sounds...

Or maybe play ot out in piano or a different instrument

You did a good job on this track, it follows a level of a game easily
I would like to see you start the song differently, but for the vast majority of the tune, you made a good track

Id say stick with just the video game music bud...
The vocals..... Your vocals are holding ya back

Czyszy responds:

Yup, i can't agree more; I'm aware that my vocals aren't all that great. Definitely need more practice.

I would see this in a mario game or a legend of zelda game.

Perfect job.
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