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[I dunno]

If you listen to 70 funk you can hear that most tunes like this flow like a lava lamp

Gotta move, gotta groove... Gota get sexyyyy

You are close!
Shorten down your run on lengths of tracks, add different sounds, and make it flooowwww

[カブキもOh! の Kunoichi B]

Asian themes are usually very spaced out and rythmic for what they sound like, even when the song is re made into a dance, or techno or electronica song the music itself retains a very spaced out format of note/revibe/revibe/ repeat. pp
Drum and base is note/revibe repeat ff
Rock is note/note/note/revibe revibe revibe ffff

Start with a slow song when you are making a oriental piece, then commonly a increase in play speed is what will kick it up to a video game or electronica song

Oh-Sama responds:

Thanks for your suggestions but to be honest I'm a hobbyist musician my friend :)
I'll try to keep in mind some of what you've said!

[Attack on Titan Theme]

Iabsoluty have to agree with frankvg on this

Volume adjustment is a must in music
You might want to just try your hand at getting the song and re-producing it into a song on your own machine...

If the song plays a few chords, go find some syncs in your library that qould fit the sounds...

Or maybe play ot out in piano or a different instrument

[MegaMan 9 (ConcreteManMIX)]

You did a good job on this track, it follows a level of a game easily
I would like to see you start the song differently, but for the vast majority of the tune, you made a good track

[Ex-NESLovers]

Id say stick with just the video game music bud...
The vocals..... Your vocals are holding ya back

Czyszy responds:

Yup, i can't agree more; I'm aware that my vocals aren't all that great. Definitely need more practice.

[Grimluck's Throne]

I would see this in a mario game or a legend of zelda game.

Perfect job.
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