River's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[STARTUP]

Innocent?
Cheesy?

This is a great song!
You should feel very proud of yourself for making this yourself!

A strong 5

itbegins responds:

Haha, thanks for liking it so much :). It's an old track and I've grown to see it's flaws, doesn't mean you can't enjoy it tho!

[SAO - Crossing Field RMX]

youtube: KlxSFfKyLe0

you dont need our help, you just need to keep making great music

djahmusic responds:

Thanx =)

[AnotherNightAnotherDream]

i don't know what you were doing with the thunder filter on your song at 4.00 all the way through to 5.21 but it totally did not add to your beat, it just made it sound muffled

[Housik]

would have started your second main cords at 24 not 31
also would have started your vocals at 33 not 41
i think that you would enjoy the results if you had the voice break down into a half second repeat...
through 41 up to a 1.26 you have the same girl singing, you can continue your buildup with simply adding the last 1/4 of your chopped audio clip to make it sound like shes kinda skipping the beat

at that point you could lead the song into a down turned beat at around 2.20 ish, then bring the girl back strong for a solo, followed with a duet of her and a really kickin audio, and finish it out with a soft bass line just like you did

keep working, you have a good half of a song already

[Torrential Downpour]

The song keeps a very steady tone all the way through, no real ups or downs.
Also while you were able to mix together a cymbal and absolutely filthy version of elctro mix, id like to see way way more effort added to include a solid background bass line, and few electric sounds, and better yet, maybe a few additions from a trance file to give it that pop that many electronic songs grow on

[Gradius III Invitation]

Might want to let up on the drums, it's painfully obvious that you have the same track all the way through the song.

I'm going to just go with the fact that you were going for 70's metal and under even that, a metal song never just.... BANG... Starts, should focus on the guitar, yeah, but a band is a band... Each member would have its own section to shine, and so far all i can hear is a guitar with variation, who keeps returning to the same chorus

keep working on it

[Paper Craft - Into Paper]

i loved how you started this song, a delicate up tone, a panning in and out audio, which is complimented with an electric piano,

it has climax
it had low points

would be interested to hear what you would make if you added a few more layers to this one for the base and a few higher notes
a very good example of what trance is

[Forever Asleep - FiM ~FNG]

i dont know what im doing here

but i listened and got into it
~thumbs up~

Omnivore responds:

Thanks tox!