River's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[8-bit Hero]

holy wow that was loud!
you dont need to put the volume up at 150%
did like the way that you put things together on this one, very classic

[New Grade]

Nice opening to this song, liked the horn variant as well.

Might want to change up the horn sounds around 1.50, and then continue to play around with the horn up to your low point at about 2.45
Other than that, I have nothing to really get picky about throughout the rest of the song

[Turn The Beat Back]

Liked the song, remember, you can include fades, moving different sounds from left to right speakers, and volume levels of certain sounds :3

ROUGE responds:

oh sh*t i forgot to do those ahhhh

[#Selfie (KC)]

The first thing that came to mind... Crazy Frog.

I would re-classify this as an electronic house instead of a dance,
Also id look back at the clapping you added in at around 1.12, while it does give a nice first user kind of feeling, I'd think you are above that kind of thing

KennyChu responds:

cool. thx for the kind review!
yes the clap may be bit over. my first attempt on this song!
i gain inspiration or if something come up to mind I just remixing it.

[Ethereal]

Use more layers on the base line, add more beats than just a solid: one TWO one TWO
You can also add more layers for the background noise too! Go wild with it!
Don't make a 3 layer, make a 10 layer :o

Enjoyed what you did with the electro lead on this though.... Very... back to basics and hard lined results

KennyChu responds:

yeah, need a bit of work on some of the sounds.

[badband]

I would go back to the fundamentals that you had in your audio file listed as "first"
You had a good thing going there, and then you are heading down a path that makes it all sound like garbage

The only good thing about this file is that it makes a good loop because i can't tell where it starts and ends for the most part

Tarteviant responds:

thanks was just playing around with some effects and backbeats

[Basshunter_-_Syndrome__Janze r]

Listened to it a few times, and all i can say is i would have liked to hear what you would have down with a run up at about 2 minuets where you focus on a single thing, then bring in a few more layers and then hit the listener over the head with the awesomeness you got going on throughout the song

[-Korp- Storm]

Liked how you started this song off with the gentle sounds, then kicked off your electronic start
Didn't like that you had the same... one TWO three FOUR... All the way through, but that can be changed up by changing up the bass line from your 3 layers that you have now, to a 6 and then have them alternate, i would love to hear what you would do with a 7 bass line layer system

Can't complain about the length and with it, your main electronic lead, if you extended it though I would add in a low side to include a downturn and then a up turn in the audio to get the song back on track

Also very good use of the higher sounds that can be herd at 1.16
its a nice touch

[Pitbulljones- Easy Days]

ohhh man...
Totally re-tag something like this as easy listening,

Also loved how you chose to have a few sounds come only out of the left and right,
i would love to hear this on a 5.1 to see if you did things with different speakers

A very very good song
strong 5

pitbulljones responds:

Thank you for the review tox! I'm really glad you enjoyed the track. The panning was pretty much did it self, chords on mid right, lead on mid left, pin the bass and drums to the middle and additional sounds can be panned harder. It's trying to free the mix up as much as possible. And I only mix in stereo so you wouldn't find anything on a 5.1 set up ha. If you ever get time please have a listen to some of my other songs, I tend to have a mix of electronic and live music. Thanks again for the very kind words. oh and i've changed the tag to.

Pitbulljones