River's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Land of Mistery]

very commonly i close my eyes and listen to peoples creations and then, see where my imagination takes me...
from a nice flowing stream... or maybe feeling how your heart fluctuates as a chickadee lands on your hand to feed on the seed in your palm...

i close my eyes to this song... and it is just dizzy... revolving... painful... bad...

start with simple sounds.. a chime... a bell... maybe a combo of the two...
then go out... dont try to add 7 things and mismatch them into a song

balancedbirds responds:

To be honest,I use only two hours to make this music and a little time to check it.
So the first and last is so simple that the music is ...^_^
Lots of music of Shadow Meadow were composed when I was twelwe.this is one of them.

Thanks for your advice!I'll find better melody and instrument group to make better music!

[Storm]

i would start with listening to other people and how they put music together, start talking to others about their techniques...

in absolute honesty... this song.... sounds.. really bad...

balancedbirds responds:

I'm just a learner.I can't compare with others^_^
I'll learn how to make better music here.Maybe after 7 years,my music will make you amazed^o^

[Bull In Field - Let It Go]

who sung this song?

yeah lets keep it that way -.-

chicken-tits responds:

so hursh, u brek r herts </3

[The Last Dance]

we all know that this is going to the front page.

LucidShadowDreamer responds:

How so o.O?
Thanks for being so confident about it though! :3

[Aero]

one of the better songs i have listened to tonight

keep that up yo

Shozi responds:

thanks man. glad you like it :)

[Snow Park']

given that you "just wanted to make a odd song" you did a bang up job.
keep that up... i think

jonadrew responds:

Haha! Glad you enjoyed it? Sadly, it's only every once in a while I can make a decent song in like this...Thanks for reviewing though :P

[Pure Imagination]

I would have liked to listen to the mashup if the voice had mated the audio better

Maybe try to find the lyrics as a voice only and then overlap it so you can play with both the song and the mans voice independently...
Good try at this

putzpie responds:

Yeah I can dig that, I'll have to keep that in mind.

Thanks though.

[Silence]

if you were to re-edit this, i would really look back into changing up the intro more then a basic background of a single drum chord,
and a spacing out melody

Repetition is not a good friend to call a friend, it leaves many pieces and people being called bland and run-on...
But simple repetition says: "but we have to keep doing the same thing, people will learn to love it!"
Go listen to the song...... HMnrl0tmd3k..... On YouTube
Peaceful and played back can still be greatly complex, it's all in how you play with sounds and how you introduce different melodies and feelings to the listener

NGKFlower responds:

Thanks for the feedback, I'll work on it a bit more. I've been planning on redoing this one for some time.
:)