River's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Rainy Day]

woah... a bit dark and brouding isant it?

i actualy enjoyed it but i have to say ...woah... this is a bit dark for people to watch isant it?

i mean just woah... i instantly know that there is a story behind this and i would enjoy hearing it but....

did i say woah...
here i will say it again
WOAH THERE!

i enjoyed the visuals and when you did the rain i enjayed it but as a sugestion... use a smaller brush or spray can if you want to make rain... the kind of rain you had no offence is actualy complementry of a typhoon and such, and i know that you were only trying to make a simple rain storm, but the fact is, (it looks a bit over the top on rain) other things could be just as simple as a more even brush stroke would look any thing that you do in the future much more sucsessful...

remember these are just tips in my opion!... it dosent mean that i dident like it... hell i realy enjoyed it actualyi had yo go back and watch it two more times to find things i dident like... and there were the smallest things...

i enjoyed the over all message that you gave out and the fact that you drove it home with the ending sequence made a real difference.

i realy truely enjoy your work and cant wait for more mind provoking and reality bending art

much gratitude
inslaver

Ninja-Spoon responds:

Thank you a lot for your comments and suggestions. I'll really put that to mind about the rain. Thanks agian.

[DREW PICKLES POOPY PANTS!]

very well done my friend, the story is well done

i enjoyed the music and the fact that you went along and actualy made a plot line of a story to a song like that is not easy...good job!
i especialy enjayed the fact that you would go into the plashbacks of (i believe his sister or him) when he was younger... again good job!...

things to watchout for in te future is the horovontal tearing and also make sure that none of your caracters all of a sudden pop of the bottom of the page with no legs or body to seak of... i think you know what i am talking about, but very well done, i have been trying to put together a sort os story like that of my own and once it is done and if it is acsepted i will put your name under the special thanks, you gave me some very good ideas

i hope to see more movies from you and i know that they will only get better...

inslaver-