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[Storyboard - Class]

woo!

i can see what you were trying to do here, and i can also see that this must have taken you ages to put together..
well done m8..
i would really like to see a second attempt at this kind of flash, and put a few voices in it so that it can tell a story, make sure that the back ground is not interfering with the drawings them selves, and you will have a instant 3.5-8 motion picture... :)
see ya around m8

[Left 4 Speed 2]

love it

that really is funnier when and after you play the game.

[Okami flash V2]

cool

very well done art.. watch that you give more attention to slippage from one object to another... you hand and sward grip should move together... as one, but at the same time should be separate objects... nice work though

[D.S.M Test2]

buttons

u should look into the idea of a button for your stop and staring the animation... it would improve your movies quite a lot... plus a stop action for you music... just so it doesn't over lap as it just did... if you are unsure on what the thing is going to be like ... export it as a movie and watch it my your self... just so that you can get all the bugs out. have a great day m8

[ode to my former lovers]

audio

nice song but your tearing at the extremes for the treble and mid frequencies for my speakers. just turn your music down on the song and you will have better audio.
have a great day

[Autism - Inside a Bubble]

yay

Yay Malachy Devine! u speak perfectly, congratulations. and i hope you have a great day. :)

[Pivot Short Fight]

gasp!!!

where are my COOKIES!!!!!

[Jouney to links quest]

improvements needed

there is some serious lag issues that need to be addressed here... your movie kicked the crap right out of my computer... and i have no idea why. but no other video does that that i have come across...
as for the actual movie. make sure that there is more animation in the talking, not just standing around and then their mouth opens. have them move, express emotion, and have comical emotion when he says that he doesn't know what NG is... i am sure that you would have got a higher score if you had done so.

ThyGentleman responds:

yeah i see that a little and im not sure on how to stop it...maybe if i save it as compact or something...

[The Man Who Could Sit...]

funny :)

where do you come up with all this material?!?
love the style of animation... ... keeps it phresh